First off, the positive. I love how Luna's outer mane is ghosted into the picture. The Shadowing for the rest of her mane gives it perfect depth. I will say you did excellent on her tail as well. The way you did her wings is very realistic, however I think maybe her left wing should be bigger, and the curl of hair near it was almost aken to be a second knee by me. Also, maybe add a shadow or reflection of her in the water. Over all though, you did a really excellent job on this picture. You definitely captured your vision in this. I will look forward to your future works.
Thought the left wing is off, everything else is stunningly beautiful. Just looking away from her face, the scenery looks sad but drawn beautifully. Luna's features resemble so much like the shows yet it gives it a diffrent feeling and a new perspective on how Luna looks. Words are to simple to say but saying what you really done here, can't be done. You gave Luna everything she needs to be Luna but so mych more and the details on her body are truely breathtaking. If I could, this would be a giant poster on my room. Absolutely beautiful. Great job and continue doing your best work!
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